(I really wish this were a real comment. But since it's not...a Spam Poem it becomes!)

The incredibly heart of your writing
 whilst appearing reasonable originally
   did not settle properly with me 
     personally right after some time. 

Someplace throughout the sentences 
   you actually managed to make me a believer
      but only for a short though. 

I nevertheless have got a challenge 
   with your leaps in logic 
      and you may do nicely to fill in those breaks. 

In the event you truly can accomplish that
   I could surely be fascinated.