(I really wish this were a real comment. But since it's not...a Spam Poem it becomes!)
The incredibly heart of your writing
whilst appearing reasonable originally
did not settle properly with me
personally right after some time.
Someplace throughout the sentences
you actually managed to make me a believer
but only for a short though.
I nevertheless have got a challenge
with your leaps in logic
and you may do nicely to fill in those breaks.
In the event you truly can accomplish that
I could surely be fascinated.
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